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Open Poetry #47

Tanka..a new approach

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2011-03-18 05:59 AM

even the pebbles
seem to have borne a new approach
a newfound glint
each bud, each footstep
on trail, too, lends significance
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..Copyright 2010/2011 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Harmony
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dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

1 posted 2011-03-18 07:50 AM

Im new here, and i loved your writing, check out mine if you have time

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-03-18 08:43 AM

Everything has its place in the universe I am believing in my old age. Even our footprints among the fragility of the sand. Nice work, as always.

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2011-03-18 10:57 AM

..dreamgal and Jerry..>>how nice of you to
comment so kindly..>>spiros

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-03-19 07:43 AM

Profoundly beautiful and so true.

Love,
Margherita

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2011-03-19 01:49 PM

..thanks Margherita..you are too kind..spiros

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