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Open Poetry #47

Never before

Skilerz
Junior Member

since 2010-06-26

Posts 22
Malaysia,Negeri Sembilan

0 posted 2011-03-17 01:17 PM

Never before in my life,
I feel like I'm losing my life
Never before in my life,
I feel like I'm living without a soul

but

I'm losing my life,
after letting you go
I'm living without a soul,
after you left me alone

I'm sorry dear,
I wish I could've been a better man
I'm sorry dear,
I wish I was there when you need me

and

Now,I'm left with regret
Now,I'm left with pain
Now,I'm left with this feeling
Of being sorry to be born

[This message has been edited by Skilerz (03-18-2011 01:31 PM).]

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-03-22 02:41 AM

So very sad. Sometimes I read the poems and just hope that people are okay. This is such a poem.

Alison

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2011-03-22 10:52 PM

this reminds me of that old quote, "the best of men are men at best." Don't remember who it was from but I guess we all need reminding of it once in a while, eh...oh and btw, may all be good in your world

Skilerz
Junior Member

since 2010-06-26

Posts 22
Malaysia,Negeri Sembilan

3 posted 2011-04-01 02:06 PM

Alison,
yeah, it is sad.but it's okay.i'm fine because i've learn how to fill my words with my sorrow

steavenr,
i've heard of the quote "the best of men are men at best" and yeah it is true that we need reminding of it once in a while.after all, it is such a meaningful quote and it inspires me. same goes to you buddy.

thanks for commenting and supporting guys and sorry for the late rep.

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