Open Poetry #47 |
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Don't throw away the packaging |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa ![]() |
DON’T THROW AWAY THE PACKAGING 16 March 2011 Two months ago I saw a rope ball in a supermarket. I wondered whether my then ten month old puppy, Benji, would like it or not and if he did, I wondered how long the ball would last. There were about five rope balls hanging there in their cellophane packets. I wanted to buy them all, but although they were only fourteen rand something, my finances were not good and it would not be sensible to buy them all, if one would last forever or if he didn’t like them. So I did the cautious thing. I bought one, carefully chosen for the colours woven into the rope. I also bought him a rope bone made of the same woven rope in the same colours. Well, he loves the bone, but oh, the ball, the ball, the ball! It was like fifty million Christmases wrapped into one. So, the Scottish blood in me allowed me to go back to the supermarket the next week to buy two more spare ones for when it had completely disintegrated, but they had all been sold. I spoke to the manager and after promises and phone calls from and to the supermarket over days, there was still no spare bally for Benji. Every day in every way the bally has been a joy beyond comprehension. Benji grabs it and rushes off with it and turns on the haunches ten times faster than a Lippizaner growling at the ball that is hanging from his mouth by the strings of now unraveled rope and he shakes it and throws it and brings it to Mommy with unparalleled excitement and joy to kick it softly (it is an inside bally – he has a tennis ball for outside that he only gets when we play outside-bally) or throw it a little way at ground level. It has lasted well for two months, Benji’s bally, and probably will last for at least another two but I knew the horror, the devastation, the cataclysmic terror of . . . one day . . . when the bally will be . . . completely disintegrated . . . forever and ever. My mind shut down every time just before I pictured Benji’s realization of that. For two months I have been trying desperately to find at least one spare rope bally for Benji but preferably three spares. I phoned every petshop that was oxymoronically remotely near and long explanations and half promises later still no spare bally for Benji . . . no spare bally for Benji . . . what was I going to do? This cannot be, I said and found another petshop to phone, but still, no spare bally for Benji. Today I came across part of the packaging of Benji’s bally with supplier’s name, item number and bar code number. I rushed to the phone and phoned the supermarket Benji’s bally came from and spoke to Simi (pronounced Simmie) and gave her every last detail of the treasure I was seeking. She said that Amichand would order more and get back to me this morning. About twenty minutes later Simi phoned again and said that they would place another order BUT . . . BUT . . . wait for it . . . they had one in the shop! Within an hour Benji and I bundled into the car and on the way I kept thinking (despite feeling that the treasure I was looking for had dissipated into the ether), that it HAD to be the right thing seeing that the item number and the barcode and the supplier all match! However, it felt as though it was just too good to be true. We arrived at the shop and I left my Benji-boy in the car and in fear and trepidation mingled with excitement and expectation, I rushed into the supermarket and . . . found Simi . . . and oh joy, oh joy, oh joy! The bally was just right and . . . unbeknown to him, hidden in a packet in a cupboard at home, Benji-dog now has a spare rope bally! Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! I have five balls for my mutt and two cloth ropes. They do love them, do they not? ~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, the precious, beautiful little Zoe! I can just see her playing with them. Currently, Benji has 1 rope ball and 1 tennis ball and 1 spare rope ball and 2 spare tennis balls, and 1 rope bone, but as 3 of the above are spare ones to replace the others when they disintegrate, Zoe beats Benji in that department! Smiles. However, as soon as more rope balls have been delivered to the supermarket, I will be getting 2 more spare rope balls. I would hate to go through not being able to find any for 2 months again! Yes, if there weren't animals in the world, I would have had to have been put into a curly jacket long ago! Smiles. Owl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Diana...I smiled as I read this, knowing how precious such a small thing can be. Hugging you both!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Martie. Simmie smiled at how happy I was to get it and said Benji must be a very special dog and I said he is, but all dogs are very special. Hugs from me and happy barks from Benji Owl |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
The poem was so sweet and fun to read. ![]() |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ken. I am glad you enjoyed it. Owl |
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