Open Poetry #47 |
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The Garden |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA ![]() |
"The Garden" She sits in her garden of yesterdays listening for the crunch of gravel beyond the bend in the road. A hat with ribbons fading shielding her face her hands resting in her lap and she waits and listens. The birds singing in the orchard go unheard. She hears only the swish of tires on the highway below the hill where she resides, in a fortress from the world. Each evening she prepares a dinner with care for two and eats alone reading his letters over and over the pages worn. When she's able, she sleeps her last thought of the day, her prayer, maybe tomorrow passers by won't see her sitting in the garden, listening and waiting. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is very beautiful, Marcia, but achingly sad. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I like this. I remember your achingly sad, but truly lovely poems from back then. It is good to read them again. ~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is lovely...sad but very beautifully expressed There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very poignant. Younger folks these days did not see that world---just after widened roads and passers-by---pass, but some of us a little older did, and remember. I feel sorry for this poem's subject in place and time, but am glad that someday by the grace of God she will find peace. I wish her well in the meantime, too. As for the orchard... A great write. |
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twistedpup Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115 |
i liked this poem, great image discription. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The sadness here lingers long after the reading. Touches the heart in that special way that only a really good poem can. Ida |
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