Open Poetry #47 |
Me ( just a little word play) |
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Me, Me becomes we, We cut to the chase, Chase a dream, Dream of love Love eternal, Eternally yours, Yours is mine, Mine forever, Forever together, Together in heart, Hearts of flowers, Flowers a garden, Garden to sow, So grow old, Old but not alone, Alone in a crowd, Crowd my thoughts, Thoughts of you, You and me, Me. [This message has been edited by katahdin (03-14-2011 09:28 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeaaaaa! From Me to . . . er . . . Me. A lot of living and emotion played out before Me got around to Me again. Haha! Gotta love it. ~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks JP from.....ME LOL, Kat >^..^< |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A delightful circle of loving and living! Leaves me with a smile on my face ~ and in my heart! Happy hug, EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the sentiment and the style is unique, and reads like a dream. Good, good!!! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks EA and Blues for the look and nice comments. Kat >^..^< |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, like it, Kat! Helen |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, Kaaaaaarrrrrrennnnnn! |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
I enjoyed this very much. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Poignant, especially as regards widows and widowers... your short, word-linked lines describe the delicate thought process of time-dulled mourning. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Love, love, love it!! Adorable! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A life time within these few words.Well done. latearrival |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks everyone, I really appreciate you stopping by to read and comment. Thanks again! Kat =^..^= |
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