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In the Morning(haiku)
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In the Morning(haiku) |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
I look to the sky as God splashed many colors to make our day bright |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very nice...like the picture you painted with your words  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Great haiku / Especially love that it was done in the 5-7-5 manner ~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~ |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
I find Haiku difficult to write but you do it wonderfully. You painted a beautiful picutre for us who are experiencing a cloudy and damp day. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Very nice! Kat >^..^< |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
God is the Master Artist! I love how He paints the sky with His Divine paintbrush!  Lovely haiku! May all your mornings be as bright and beautiful!  EA |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Faithmariee- Thanks for the comment JerryPat2- I'm glad, thank you Wordweaver- Hope it brightens your day  Katahdin- Very happy thank you EarthAngel- The same to you thanks for reading  |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very nice. The original Poet did not waste this morning with you there! |
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