Open Poetry #47 |
Sound of Solitude |
Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
sound of solitude beside the wood's edge skippingthrough clear water sounds of river’s flow |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I seem to remember something called clear water . . . Oh, now I recall, Clearwater Revival . . . Loved your haiku, but then I always do, you have the knack for this particular form. ~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now some nice misty lilacs leaning over the clear, running waters would add to the scene nicely. Mind you, the poem and photo are perfect as they stand! Ah! The peaceful solitude of communing with Nature... Nicely done, Marti! Love you! Linda Lou |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine poetic and photographic imagery ... about 'as beautiful as it gets' !! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Beautiful! Kat >^..^< |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Love it, love it, LOVE IT! Owl |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely - and so peaceful. Helen |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
JerryPat2 ... LOL! I remember that song! Anyway, thank you for your very kind reply. I love writing haikus and usually can find or take a picture to go with whatever I write. ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
My dear sweet Linda Lou, I apologize for not returning your email. Please know I am so excited and thrilled for you that you are home and on the mend. I missed you so much and missed reading your beautiful poetry. I would love some lilacs also but I don't think they like the cold and snow!! love you, Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
secondhanddreampoet, WOW, what a wonderful compliment and response to 17 words and a picture. Thank you so very much. ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Kat, thank you! One day soon, hopefully it will look like this again. Sooo much snow this year and I am really ready for spring and summer. ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Ms. Owl, thank you so much. I saw the picture and just had to write something. I just love to write haikus! ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Honeybunch, thank you so very much. I appreciate your kind comment! ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely. A |
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