Open Poetry #47 |
Heart of the Evening |
Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Sitting silently I watch the fog drift by my window and hear the surf pounding onshore. It’s a night for gazing into the fire and idling the time away. My book, face down on the table, tempting me not quite enough. One of your favorite compositions plays softly in the background and suddenly I hear you. Your steps upon the sand are hesitant and as faint as a bird’s breath but heard and recognized. Through the haze I see you pause, gaze towards my window, hesitate, and then disappear. Hastening to call you back I find no footprints in the soft cold sand. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery and 'Romanticism' ... excellent 'write' ! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Excellent poetry. What the mind can do to us when we are lonely and wishful can sometimes be very good, but turns into hard reality eventually. I may not have said that exactly how I feel at the moment, but I loved this poem. ~ After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles." ~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Wishfull thinking, I've been there! enjoyed! Kat >^..^< [This message has been edited by katahdin (03-13-2011 07:40 PM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Goosebump material, Marcia....sadly and beautifully done. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite! Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ Saved faster than you can say "ethereal". My word, that was one fine piece of spine-tingling writing with a feather's touch! Fine imagery! EA |
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twistedpup Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115 |
delightful little poem. im becoming a fan of yours with each poem i read. keep up the great work. *hugs* |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
This is hauntingly beautiful. I love how you ended it. Great poem! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hauntingly beautiful, WordWeaver. Ida |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sad but beautiful. Pleasure to read your work. Read several of them on this page. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The connection goes on and you confirm it in this magnetic write. In the quietness our perceptivity increases. Very beautiful. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just read 8 or so pieces by you - first time I've read Anything by you, my friend. Will not be my last. Love the touch you have with words. jwesley |
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