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Shahrazad New Member
since 2011-03-11
Posts 4USA |
Hello! I'm 17 and new here and just wanted to post a poem I wrote today and see what everyone thinks. I'm more into free verse and spoken word - this one's a bit vague, though. Hope you like it! save broken wings i wrote you a poem maybe it doesn’t mean as much as a flawless name for the ancestors you could never blame they tried, they did you told me why they left sailing away to avoid stagnation the ocean still knows their silent starvation she cried, you told me, she wept maybe it’s better here safe, but it still rains they moved in time, but with time came pain she never remembered the sun i think I’ll make it maybe it’s not my choice i wipe your tears, clear my voice i wrote you a poem maybe she’ll listen in peace Thanks! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip! Your first entry is quite lovely and intriguing. Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Mysterious poetry. ~ After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles." ~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You write just the way I like! So, I hope you will share much more! Welcome to PiP! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Shahrazad New Member
since 2011-03-11
Posts 4USA |
Thanks, guys!  |
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