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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Like little twigs and switches I search ceaselessly for the meal, of my muse in you. You are the tinder that spurs and kindles the soft smolder and eruptions that warms my awakening and cuddles, my consciousness in all that is upright and becoming. Yes, it is you. My fondness for you is bona fide in its deliverence, between the seam of separation and openess that quakes and quivers in the soul forsaken and the glows, of reality. What is truth but blush and tear in bodyspeak that yearns for one to, be near. We listen too much with our mind sometimes instead of giving heed to the glistening gleam of our own melted elixir and concoction. If you want the solace of lone and still then simply turn, turn away and walk; walk from the warmth of my swelter, walk from our steamy incandescence till the sky perspires and forever the last ember of my hearth succumbs, in vanishing whisps of silence and sleep, eternal. My lot is that I, and you are the what could and should have beens that simply, never will. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Once again such excellent expressions in poetic garb. Love this.. "and cuddles, my consciousness in all that is upright and becoming." Nice indeed and very earth solid realistically romantic....There's always a way and sometimes we actually catch on. Loved the weave and enjoyed the read. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What is truth but blush and tear in bodyspeak that yearns for one to, be near. We listen too much with our mind sometimes instead of giving heed to the glistening gleam ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is exquisite, Richy!! Each word is like a brook where the clear water takes it's sweet time....lingering in warm pools, leading to a waterfall, where rainbows form in the cool mist. Makes me wish I was there. Sometimes your poetry brings tears to my eyes, it is so full and rich, so tender...and always written with great care.... often times I feel the bittersweetness raining down on me. x/o |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks so much Eric my friend, I'm glad you are, catching on... whenever you do get a chance, let me in on the secrets as well... I could use a little help figuring it out myself...  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Don’t cry Bluesy, okay, just smile No need to wish of being, within any of these words. You already are, and always have been… (((You))) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Not only the above quoted words, but every line in this poem is simply gorgeous, dear Richy. It feels like dancing along your thoughts ... Love, Margherita |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Margy, Margy, where have you been, I've been worrying about you?! Thanks sweet friend for the thoughtful sentiments, you know I appreciate them so. Oh hey, and thanks for the dance... I didn't realize you could rumba so well Richard |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"What is truth but blush and tear in bodyspeak that yearns for one to, be near." ...this, too, was a show-stopper for me...nice write |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Wonderful as always! Kat >^..^< |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks Steven, its always comforting to see your name and kind words Kat, so nice to hear from you again, I appreciate it immensely! |
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