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when words fail |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
explain it, I cannot but I do know how to say it say it, I cannot but I do know how to feel it feel it, I cannot but I do know how to show it show it, I cannot but I do know how to share it share it, I cannot but I do know how to explain it explain it, I cannot but I do know how to cry and so I do and so, I do |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
In other words you can't get there from here. ~ Never did I feel more devoted to my wife than after biting the wild garlic of treachery ~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
yes sir, wherever the 'here' or 'there' may be (they are, after all, only a 't' apart)  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Steven my friend, you're killing me here... whats wrong buddy, come tell uncle Richy, we'll work it out somehow... Hugging you friend, hang in there, things will get better. Enjoyed the writing. Richard |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
wow wow wow! A very telling poem and deeply felt. Good on ya, steavenr~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A frustration written for the emotions of a poet trying to explain the frustration of emotions. So I too do. Loved it! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't say I've ever had this predicament before at least not that I remember now anyway |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
.. at least you expressed yourself on paper..important step..>>spiros |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this came across as very sad to me and something i can relate to as well...very nicely done! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
to everyone...first, my apologies...didn't mean for this to come across as so dark...don't really have time right now to answer everyone (will later today)... I am so OK that I often feel guilty about it ...smiles, and lots of 'em |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hey well I take back what I said then... don't hang in there... har har glad to hear things are alright friend |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Richy, you crack me up...you are like that uncle that lives in the other room that...well you get the idea... Thanks man, I appreciate it |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Blues, wow...3 wows...I am honored...thank you Eric, you do so get it. Thank you for the kind comments. passing, then you are truly blessed. or you’ve lost your memory. smilesthank you spiros for reading and commenting...I appreciate it Faith, thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment. Here’s hoping the sadness is only a shadow at the end of the day. Richy, are you out of your room again...and who let you out? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes I think I've lost my memory because of all that alcohol but no, I am blessed indeed, for always being able to express myself, at times on an even deeper level than I realized...and for expressing what others could not for themselves. So if I died tonight, I'd go with a smile on my face, just for simple reasons like this. |
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