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Hard Cold Sky
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Hard Cold Sky |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The sky is that pale shade of blue That makes you want to cringe Hard on the eyes hard on the heart As I sit here thinking about you Wondering if all you said is true Or hard cold lies like that hard cold sky I give in to believing But then you go doing something that makes me doubt you all over again And I'm back here under these hard cold skies Not knowing what to trust what to believe why...to beleive The sky is that pale shade of blue Hard on the heart But not near as hard ...as you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Paula So nice to read your work again. This is real blusey and could be made into a song very easily. The state of your frustrated condition is very well expressed in this comparison. I enjoyed this very much. Sorry to hear about the cold hard love that's never nice. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
the hard cold sky is the flip side of the warm one, with hues of pretty clouds wisps, white and blue. All in the eye, all in the heart as well. Very thought provoking words. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Eric you know you always can use my stuff for your music if it works...thanks my friend I miss being here. Emma yes theres always a flip side to anything |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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