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Open Poetry #47

Tears

gdcod3player
Member

since 2009-09-13

Posts 70
California

0 posted 2011-03-02 12:50 PM

My mind is filled with nonsense
Was this the end of our play?
Was this the end of the world?
Now my heart has been played
Everything is breaking around me
Let the world crumble down
Can we talk tonight?
Let me hold you till the last word
Let my heart cry all night
Im tired of showing how much i care
My eyes are too tired of holding on to you for so long
Where were you when i needed to drain my tears?
Let me love you

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2011-03-02 02:38 AM

Whew, this is quite the deep cry from the heart.
Think it's true one can love too hard sometimes but then as the Doobie Brothers put it in "Long Train Running"
"Without love, where would we be now?"

Thanks for sharing.

Eric

the writer views a critic like a fire hydrant would view a dog

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2011-03-02 11:31 PM

Sometimes, the best kind of love is the love were you accept someone for who they are, no matter how cruel and hard they are to your fragile heart.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-03-02 11:53 PM

this is heart-wrenching...i can relate to your feelings in this one and like how you ended the poem...nice job

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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