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gdcod3player Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 70California |
Dont give me that horrifying speech Leave me with the holes Send me a letter with what i should say Throw me away like there was nothing Shoot me with a diamond bullet Everything is breaking down Let my world crumble until you speak I want to know why you threw me away Give me all the answers All the hours of the day Let me count the time until there is nothing My soul has been your slave My heart is red Let me talk again somehow You know what ill say "my heart is roaring let it show you im back" I wish i could hold you forever I wish you would let me sleep I've been listening softly I've let you slip away Let my heart bleed Ive been dying since you left me Let me hold you in my eyes Let me speak |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I feel like I just rode a very seriously tall wave... intense!  (I like intense) enjoyed |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
been there...thought that...nice write |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
been there too, I wish it never happens again, thanks for the poignant , moving and superb write... change your mind try to forget the treacherous girl (or boy) park your car in front of a museum and visit artful people, there are unknown eyes to open yours again. yann |
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