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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Motivational Speaker I can't live anymore in a relationship thats not real. I need a woman I can touch and feel. The very nature of a relationship is to be together... It takes a toll on the heart when apart. Perhaps you're not sincere. I've been wondering for the longest time my dear. The truth is revealed by actions taken or perhaps by words forsaken. Show up or stop speaking... JamesLee 07January 2011 |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey |
This is very honest. They say "absence makes the heart grow fonder", but that is only sometimes true. Distance is difficult.. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It's been a long road that you have shared with us. I hope it works out for you both. Love the poem ~ and I continue to hope. Alison |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love the bold truth of this last part. "The truth is revealed by actions taken or perhaps by words forsaken." Show up or stop speaking... Good work James! Eric |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i like the honesty and raw emotion in this well written poem...powerful piece. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
James, you've known "me" for as long as I've known "you"... quote: and sometimes it parts the heart when too near. But I liked it! |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
I akso like the line. (It takes a toll on the heart when apart). |
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