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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
 swaying all day the snow falls the silence is deafening trees follow the wind |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love the quiet of snow falling; it's a special music to me. And I love the wind, but I hate when the wind blows all the snow off the branches. Maybe it helps out the branches by relieving them of weight - but hey! The wind could be a friend and blow some weight of me too! Ya know! A |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery both 'poetic' and photographic! |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
nice imagery though I tire of winter I forget there is much beauty in it thanks for reminding us. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful, dear Marti. I could drown in that snowy silence ... I become deaf to "turbulences" and just enjoy BEING. Love, Margherita |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Alison, yesterday was a beautiful, quiet day although the wind was definitely howling. But it didn't seem to bother me like it usually does. I actually enjoyed watching it snow and listening to the sounds of the wind with some soft music playing and a fire in the fireplace. I had a hot cup of tea and our Lily dog snuggling beside me on the couch. ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
secondhanddreampoet, thank you so much for your kind response! ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Jackal, living in NH, it has been a long, snowy winter and I too am tired of it. I look forward to Spring. But, I like you, have to admit that it was a beautiful day yesterday! ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Margherita, there is no question that yesterday was just a "being" day. I loved every second of it! ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Isn't wonderful how we understand how the silence can be deafening.... Good writing and the pic's very fitting. Eric the writer views a critic like a fire hydrant would view a dog |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nicely penned. I can hear that silence roaring inside my head. ~ Never did I feel more devoted to my wife than after biting the wild garlic of treachery ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Marti, I loved reading your exquisite poem and looking at your photo and just drinking in the ambiance of a world unknown to me, except through you and other Pipsters. I enjoyed all of the replies too in their delicious diversity. Hugs to you and Lily-doggy Owl |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Eric, JerryPat2, Diane, thank you all for the great responses to my little haiku! I am grateful. Wishing you all well. ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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