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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
I close my eyes… And try to hide, The feelings I feel inside… I can not explain it, I mean the way I feel inside… But I know one thing is true, The way I feel is real… Hidden so deep inside, I try to keep how I feel about you to myself… Cuz for how I feel, I know if forbidden… I know I can’t be with you, For it would be breaking the law… Your too perfect, And I’m just a mistake… I’d do anything just to feel your touch, Just one more time… Opon my skin… I’d do anything to hear your voice, Saying my name, For it sounds so sweet… Like angels singing in the heavens Oh why can’t I express my hidden feelings? My love for you is something you’ll never know… What could be us can’t be shown… So I just close my eye… And hide in my own world, The world where everything isn’t just black and white… My world where I can express my feelings, And not be judged… |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Even so, I think you have to come out and show them. Means too much to your inner well being. Feelings so well expressed in this We're all judged over something in this world of experiences. Pleased to meet you. Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
an old man once told me "better to express oneself and be judged than to keep silence and be judged" ...I think he was trying to tell me that what 'they' thought meant nothing...nice write |
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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
Thank you everyone for your kind words... on my poem it means alot to me... |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
A very sincere bit of longing here. Lovely. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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incwrite Member
since 2010-12-31
Posts 55new york |
very heartfelt read... |
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