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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Darlin’ And I imagine My life different There would Have been breakfast Eggs and bacon Children At least two A boy and a girl What more Than that I can not tell What would you expect After all It’s just One word . |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
deeply poignant. yann |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
OK, I am very quickly becoming a major fan of your writing, Huan Yi. You have much talent and am a bit curious as to when you first began to write? Jan |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you both Jan, I would say the real beginning was when I got to begin scuba diving alone. Before, in the USMC, I once saw a master sergeant sorting through another Marine’s personal effects before they were sent home to the family. I was a pretty intense lone diver; people assumed one day I wouldn’t come back. I took the two to heart and so I began to write and then make miniature copies of the results to carry in a billfold left in my gear bag. Things pretty much progressed from there. Thanks again both for reading John . |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
john~ love this back~story and your poem... sometimes darlin' says it all  shellie don't wait for the storms to end~ |
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