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THE WATER FALL
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THE WATER FALL |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315
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One more from a little kid. The Water Fall By Billie (8yr.) I stopped up in the canyon By a pretty waterfall, It looked just like a fairy vail Hung on the mountain wall. The trees and moss below it Looked like a gay green dress. Mother nature knows the colors That look the best, I guess. ***** *** ***** |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love your inspiration...Mother natures finery serves you well. This was truly a delight to read. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Poets are born, not made. A Latin saying. So upon billowing words poets dance among the Uni-Verse of the talent that you have. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
very pretty, my friend j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Awesome Billie! Truly you are a natural talent! Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Billie. It is apparent that your connection with Nature has been with you for your entire life. Your talent for writing ~ and observing ~ was remarkable for one so young. As our fellow pip poet DLesterYoung wrote in a reply somewhere today, there is a Latin saying about a poet being born, not made! You m'dear, are proof of that.  Love & a warm hug, Linda  |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
This brings a nice cool and refreshing break from a heat wave rolling through the west this week. Very nice,. Love Tracey. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Billie that is one cute poem, a joy to read. I can see you have had a lifetime of writing poetry, it stands out in your writing.Thank you for sharing. Love to you dear Lady. Lindsay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Billie - I know of this waterfall, for we have one just down the road... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Billie, this is a beautiful as much as an intelligent poem, the description lend subtlety to the mind, a very agreable read...Thanks a lot for the creative poem. yann |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
My thanks to all who stopped by today, I do appreciate your kind comments. Love 'un stuff, Billie C. |
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