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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2009-07-17 03:06 PM

Love Devotion Sonnet Skyline

Commitment wedded vow notion
Massaged friction built love lotion.
Warmth swelling delight devotion
Lifetime circulation motion.
Germinated blossom potion
Ceaseless passion locomotion,
Bliss highlight of kissed emotions.

Soul mate poetic see shoreline
Merging together crystalline
Sparkling diamond ringing coastline
Sun rise into sunset headlines
Anniversaries entwined hotlines
Blessing heaven hugged storylines.
Love’s devotion sonnet skyline.

David Lester Young 07/17/09 © all rights owned by author
De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (07-17-2009 10:36 PM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-07-17 05:10 PM

"Warmth swelling delight devotion
Lifetime circulation motion"

and

"Soul mate poetic see shoreline
Merging together crystalline
Sparkling diamond ringing coastline
Sun rise into sunset headlines"

really enjoyed this

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2009-07-17 05:12 PM

It is like a little song you read it and it sings in your head
I to enjoyed this piece..Thank you
Annie

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

3 posted 2009-07-17 05:26 PM

Thank you SEA and Anniepimm for you comments that blessed me.

May you and the rest of the poets here have a blessed day.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-07-17 05:33 PM

DLY, you have a unique style of writing which I find intriguing. There is nothing frivilous about it. Each word has impact. Here are a few of my favourite lines.

"Commitment wedded vow notion
Massaged friction built love lotion.
Warmth swelling delight devotion
Lifetime circulation motion.
Germinated blossom potion
Ceaseless passion locomotion,
Bliss highlight of kissed emotions.

Soul mate poetic see shoreline
Merging together crystalline
Sparkling diamond ringing coastline
Sun rise into sunset headlines
Anniversaries entwined hotlines
Blessing heaven hugged storylines.
Love’s devotion sonnet skyline."

~ By golly, it's ALL of them!

EA

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

5 posted 2009-07-17 07:10 PM

Earth Angel Thank You.

You had me going and thinking, maybe you marked them, then the last line threw me, thank you.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2009-07-17 09:23 PM

Thank you for this gift, it is perfect in every way.
The feelings most of all!!

wow!!

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

7 posted 2009-07-17 09:41 PM

BluesSerenade Thank You for your words made mine skip a heart beat of joy. Blessings.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2009-07-18 05:15 PM

Very nice rhythm and delightful content!

Love,
Margherita

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

9 posted 2009-07-18 05:52 PM

Margherita Thank You for your comment and time, blessings.

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