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Mcmust Junior Member
since 2009-07-09
Posts 17TN |
I sat at the desk Looking at the window framing the clouds in the sky, the green lawn reaching out to carpeting the orchard. Sun, in the shades of those trees Studying the mysterious earth Friends in other end of the world, Sent a massage, saying that she is growing old Who can ignore the wrinkles folding by time in the mirror of our esteem Through the window the eternal life Shown by heavenly fingers For Many, many years |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Who can ignore the wrinkles folding by time in the mirror of our esteem Great passage! Rich |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Mcmust! Welcome to piptalk! "I sat at the desk Looking at the window framing the clouds in the sky," ~ You effectively set the scene and the tone of the poem, right from the get go!  Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel  |
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