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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA 
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white water raging waters take me over rocks bruise my soul rushing rapids steal my strength i pray for sandy shores will no one rescue me? |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Sometimes when drowning we grasp at surface leaves... Was so proud to see you learn to flip that kayak over right on your very own. Beautiful pen. Love you, H |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi and welcome~ really wonderful poem! |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
H, thanks for your kind words. what a ride it's been! ;-) bluesserenade, thanks for stopping by. glad you enjoyed it. maranda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hope you find those sandy shores, Angellea. Welcome. Ida |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
Indeed I have dear, Ida. Thanks for stopping by. maranda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I've done some white water rafting on the Ottawa River up here in Canada! If you are experiencing those kind of "raging waters" in your life, I can certainly understand your need for finding a sandy shore!  Seriously speaking, your metaphor was very effective in expressing your situation. Somehow I believe that a little angel like yourself, will be able to reach that sandy shore on your own. I'll go with you to make sure!  Love & a helping 'wing', Earth Angel  |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
earth angel, thank you so much for you thoughtful comment. i did find my sandy shore. thanks for stopping by. you're a doll! maranda |
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