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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Pale yellow, soft orange hues, a peaceful canvas to melt in, as the day is laid to rest, The evening sun quietly sets, a perfect moment with you, golden, pure, sweet, Nothing could be so complete, you kiss me to seal the magic, the magic of this moment is timeless, Peer into the gentleness of my eyes, brush back hair scented with vanilla, Tell me how much you love me more, Let this be the start of our journey... I dream in fantasy, because reality is scary~Millette (ARH) |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast |
This may be one of the best yet on this forum. I like the way you blend the twilight with the romance that ensues. And if this is written for a male partner, what a lucky dude he is!  "And every time I've held a rose |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
The breath of your words fills my vast sails of passion, and carries me ever closer.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
breathtaking!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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