Open Poetry #45 |
Kiss and Make Up |
Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
His hand softly touches her bare shoulder She gives love response as his voice whispers Sweet nothings upon her cornsilk vespers Brushed wholesomely to beautiful lush myrrh Scented shine. Her perfume deeply bestirs His flesh to a breathless warmth. Smiles occur Between them, she slips a small palm under His and they let go the world. Twilight purrs In crimson and violet, lavender And grey as one melts into the other. Slowly each star appears in their rhythm, Body and soul meld on an orbit spur To parallel the Milky Way together! Sighs escape while heartbeats quietly drum... [This message has been edited by Bloodline (07-16-2009 11:19 PM).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A very romantic escape! ~enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Bloodline, my own blood be stirred with this sweetly romantic write. Just lovely! Truly lovely! ~ Sensually, emotionally, and pictorally appealing! EA |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Just beauatiful , Mr. G Bloodline, sensual and flowing like the love and romance this poem sends out. Thanks Jan |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Lovely, just lovely. The picture goes well with the words. Well done. Billie C. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The quiet drum is so steady and sure, I love that about this. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Romance in wondrous outfit! Most beautiful and stirring. Love, Margherita |
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