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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Looking up, Reach for the cross It fades away Another loss Leaves blood stains The color red I sink into Fills my head Pierces through Here it comes again With voices haunt Cannot win What cannot want Grip tightens Dry cracked throat As air lightens And here I float Watching change All that’s left to me Feeling strange Ripped parts of me More human somehow I sense the death Of here and now By mortal breath Escaping down, By design or whim I am lost in convolution Sink or swim Follow final solution |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
This poem is excellent the flow is flawless, And very well written..  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I enjoy your happy, romantic poems, you need some cheer! but I know we have our bad days too! Sending a hug~ ~ARH  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~heartfelt pain here, jer... nicely rendered... shells |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Words felt emotions of the roller coaster Uni-Verse of writing with power. |
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