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unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

0 posted 2009-07-15 07:39 PM

I lament as a nomad lost
a beggar roaming sighways
humid skin transgression
shimmers newborn upon velvet nude
liquid rivulets lash bashful
of turquoise and sin on purpose
from the fray of gathering pieces
and clutching them to nurse
in the dahlias of my breasts

I swallow your puzzle
amethyst in the wanting mist
as my womb stretches around your fragments

and I shatter with you

making perfect fit pictures
beneath the reddening sky
becoming a little less heathen
with each elysium cry

of redemption and oh god
H

Bloodline
Member

since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

1 posted 2009-07-15 08:00 PM

And oh my, sensuous
with vista's of word
and sweet emotions,

Bloodline

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

2 posted 2009-07-15 08:11 PM

~hey, beautiful girly : )

you are kickin' some serious butt with this...

beautiful...

hope all is well,

shel

don't wait for the storms to end~
learn how to dance in the rain...

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

3 posted 2009-07-15 08:45 PM

Bloodline
Thank you kindly. I appreciate the gift of your reply.

Shel
I've been told I can be downright evil with my heels on. Thanks sweetie, and things are WONDERFUL. My girl came home today...

Love,
Heather

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-07-16 08:37 AM

liquid rivulets lash bashful
of turquoise and sin on purpose

Is there any other kind of sin? lol
Wow, H.
Very deep and sensual stuff. I think I need to re-read it a few times to let it sink in.

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

5 posted 2009-07-16 09:25 AM

Probably, like sin-accidental,but there again, likely more on purpose than we would admit.

Thanks Jerry!
H

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2009-07-16 09:33 AM

ms UBP..somehow that look in your eyes
makes forgivness something I would never mention..neyes work ms

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

7 posted 2009-07-16 11:29 AM

*G*

Thanks Darkdaddy.
L,
H

angellea
Member

since 2009-03-29

Posts 144
NC, USA

8 posted 2009-07-17 11:49 AM

I swallow your puzzle
amethyst in the wanting mist
as my womb stretches around your fragments

OMG!!! :-) love it, love it, love it.

BTW...your picture does NOT do you justice.;-)

love,
me

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

9 posted 2009-07-17 12:33 PM

ROFLMFAO

come here and gimme a kiss angelgurl

((((( maranda )))))

happy dancing to see you back!

Thanks and spanks and big love,
Heffer

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2009-07-17 01:18 PM

You are such a fine poet, and it's always so good to read you.

Enjoyed this, so so much!!

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

11 posted 2009-07-17 01:25 PM

Oh Blues~
Thank you for the treat of your comment!
You are such a pretty lady...
L,
Heather

doodlebug
New Member

since 2009-04-17

Posts 2

12 posted 2009-07-18 01:43 PM

Hi UP I don't know what elysium is but you made it sound good. I like this. -doodle

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

13 posted 2009-07-18 02:30 PM

ha ha little sis
here you go

elysium

1. Also called Elysian Fields. Classical Mythology. the abode of the blessed after death.
2. any similarly conceived abode or state of the dead.
3. any place or state of perfect happiness; paradise.
4. an area in the northern hemisphere of Mars, appearing as a light region when viewed telescopically from the earth.

Love you.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2009-07-18 04:52 PM

Love the paradox of sin and elysium ... "oh god" holds just everything that enables the pure bliss and erases any wrongness that we might consider of any weight.

Poetically breathtaking.

In your beautiful picture there is just the right amount of intriguing mystery!

Love,
Margherita

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

15 posted 2009-07-18 06:05 PM

Thank you lovely Margherita.
You replies are always sweet incense for this poetess's heart.
Love,
Heather

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

16 posted 2009-07-19 11:14 AM

Heather,
Sharp and heady verse, showed its edges and curves here. Very well written.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

17 posted 2009-07-19 11:56 AM

Your brilliance ~ and talent ~ come shining through this highly creative ~ and intriguing ~ piece of writing!

EA

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

18 posted 2009-07-19 12:56 PM

ThisDiamond
Appreciate you so very much, TY for stopping by.

EA
TY for the flutter by...I thought I heard wings!

Love,
Heather

rad802
Member

since 2008-04-19

Posts 279
KY U.S.A.

19 posted 2009-07-19 05:00 PM

The colection of words here creates a rich texture of mystery that can only be pondered by me in these few moments I have to enjoy you.
Thanks
Rick

A worthy legacy is the irrevocable consequence of dreaming.
Rick A. Delmonico

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

20 posted 2009-07-19 08:21 PM

Thank you Rick~glad to have you enjoy, even if fleetingly...smiles...
Heather

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