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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-07-15 08:38 AM

A final bloom
of Summer upon
my sunlit tiarra
the dance a mambo
in a bipolar frenzy

neither wind nor
bumblebee could
tarnish the moment

you were sleepy eyed
and shoeless

i was a tonedeaf
canary

we slipped off
the meadow

but never withered
with the petals

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2009-07-15 11:02 AM

I always love to read your poetry! ~ I love the ending. wow...

ARCTIC WIND

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-07-15 11:48 AM

inkedgoddess - always enjoy reading your writings. Another excellent one here...

BC

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-07-20 04:58 PM

This slipped me by ... but I am happy that it called out to me.

Exquisite, dear Michele!

Love,
Margherita

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Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2009-07-20 05:26 PM

This is wonderful and I am a fan.

A

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2009-07-20 11:34 PM

MicheleRose

"neither wind nor
bumblebee could
tarnish the moment"

Linda

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