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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-07-15 03:31 AM

Softly you flow through my long hair,
a cooling sensation all over,
like tickling feathers across my face,
cool, crisp, just a little chill,

I see you through the trees,
as you pick up the leaves,
tossing them to and fro,
blowing all around me,

Seducing me to follow you,
I hear you whisper through valleys,
green valleys of natures beauty,
where the river flows over rocks,

At night, through the dark,
I see you dancing in my white curtains,
just enough to tease me,
then as I close my eyes,

You brush across my cheek,
slow, soft, little puffs,
as if to say goodnight,
you and I share this dance,

The moon is our guest,
sometimes you kiss my toes,
blow my paper to the floor,
being the flirt you are,

You, Me, and the moon,
late at night, we belong,
friends and lovers are we,
writing our forlorn songs,

When the window closes,
you disappear, out of sight,
flame burns steady now,
I dream of you and blow out the light.

I dream in fantasy, because reality is scary~Millette (ARH)

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-16-2009 06:33 AM).]

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

1 posted 2009-07-15 03:55 AM

That's really lovely so soft and gentle to read
Excellently penned

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

2 posted 2009-07-15 04:32 AM

Really like this, it invokes a man's fantasy of his heart's desire's thoughts and feeling. Finished very strong, leaving none to want

Johan
Member

since 2009-05-13

Posts 88
Lincolnshire, England U.K.

3 posted 2009-07-15 07:01 AM

What a lovely and peaceful poem, I really enjoyed reading it.

Johan

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-07-15 08:47 AM

You live up to your screen name, this is very romantic and seductive. Great poem.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2009-07-15 11:07 AM

This is inspiring as well!! ~ Love this ARH! My, my, this is a romantic write attached to nature. I always love nature.

ARCTIC WIND

Bloodline
Member

since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

6 posted 2009-07-15 08:23 PM

A song of enchantment and dreams,
a poetic embrace for the soul,

Bloodline

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

7 posted 2009-07-16 04:03 AM

This is my favourite from you in a while, my love.

To think that the moon is always watching...

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