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The Eye of Her World
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The Eye of Her World |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
be steadfast the way out will only come once howard : wait!!!!!! you're going to fast eve : i'm sorry Howard but i need this fast and you need to stop living in the past howard : wait!!!!!!!! eve : i'm sorry Eve disappears through the doorway and with a flash of light the doorway disappears [falls to his knees] but i had more to say ........ i had more to say [closes the book] publisher : The Wheel of Time eve : huh? publisher : that's what this reminds me of The Wheel of Time what does Howard think? eve : he likes it so far publisher : by the way he told me to tell you he'd be late with the car eve : huh? publisher : the car ..... he'll be late with the .... are you feeling okay? eve : yes i'm fine you said he'll be late with the wheels this time? publisher : uh huh eve : okay love, eve & howard |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast |
Well, I must admit to be kind of left out of what's really happening here but I do like the format. I've done this a time or two and, like this one, it's effective. Good one. "And every time I've held a rose |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
thanks oldpoet |
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