Open Poetry #45 |
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Since Your Gone |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan ![]() |
Since your gone. Beer bottles lean on each other On my dirty cluttered counter. My dog eyes the pizza box left on the coffee table. In the other room, my drunken friends are Watching Sunday night football. As I stand at the fridge and take a drink straight from the milk jug I laugh and pass gas at the same time, Thinking of you. Yoin |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Yoinn, Ah, those introspective moments, Bloodline |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~freakin' hilarious!! ![]() love, berney don't wait for the storms to end~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A true debochee scenery! Men just can't cope with dignity! I fear this reflects a diffused reality ... Not yours I hope! ![]() Love, margherita |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Ah its what i live for those moments. thanks for the reply Blood Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
hehe Thanks berney. Yoin (burp) |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Me? oh no way, this is all fiction Margherita I spend my nights reading and writing poetry with a glass of brandy and ( hey turn that TV down in there you morons) and my cat. Yoin [This message has been edited by Yoinn (07-14-2009 05:43 PM).] |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. good It's tough to be free. . |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Yeah it really is Huan. I guess i will just keep drinking and smoking my cigars until I get the hang of it. ![]() Yoin |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Multi tasking like that takes a bit of skill... glad you laugh that hard! Cute poem |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
LOL TD yeah and I forgot to put in I had my cigar in my hand too. Maybe i will do a rewrite. thanks Yoooooiiinnnnn |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Yoinn - you are truly an artist, I love this writing... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Yo Yoinn, it looks very famailair to me, specially the fridge and the pizza part, Enjoyed very much your thoughts here in a very shared lifestyle, I wish it won't last ...Thanks for the poem. yann |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thanks Bill I do appreciate your replies. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
thanks Yann I keep my bicycle in the livin room now too. lol Yoin |
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