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Open Poetry #45

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OldPoet
Member

since 2009-06-30

Posts 112
The Left Coast

0 posted 2009-07-12 11:39 PM

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2009-07-13 12:09 PM

i am such a fan of yours
your poetry is incredible
ALL of it

OldPoet
Member

since 2009-06-30

Posts 112
The Left Coast

2 posted 2009-07-13 12:10 PM

Well Slick One, I'm a big fan of you're being my big fan. Thank you very much!

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2009-07-13 03:47 AM

I like Helen, am enjoying your posts. Well written.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

4 posted 2009-07-13 04:06 AM

I think I read your last line wrong, maybe needed a comma after heart. I asked myself, what is a heart remote. It may just be my distracted mind though. great write

OldPoet
Member

since 2009-06-30

Posts 112
The Left Coast

5 posted 2009-07-13 11:50 PM

I see your point, Martinia, but I think the pause there would break the rhythm. Thanks for the comment.

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

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