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The Woman
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The Woman |
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Deb123 New Member
since 2009-07-12
Posts 6Hampshire, England |
The woman in my dreams, she sings to me softly. Away in the distance, she whispers my name. She struts round my pshye, so lightly, so boldly. She calls to me gently "Come play my game." Her raven black hair, streams out far behind her. It tangles about me, pulling me in. This pure unmarked creature, parading before me. Is asking, inviting and pleading me "Sin" Her eyes from afar, bore through to my soul. My yearning, requesting, my needing is seen. The look lights my darkness, making me feel whole. I groan in my sleep, is this but a dream? Her skin so inviting, I race out to meet her. It wraps all about me, welcomes me in. This satin skinned bueaty, pressed close in beside me. My arms wrap her body, just caressing. Her lips look so soft. I reach up to kiss them. The touchnig so gentle, chills down my spine. She kisses me deeply, her taste bowls me over. Her hair wraps around us, she is all mine. As we fall to the ground, i awake from my slumber. I moan as i realise, that once again. My raven haired wonder, has invaded my night. And left me fustrated, till i dream once again. The woman in my dreams, she sings to me softly. And all through my day, she whispers my name. And i whisper gently, "I'll come play your game." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Deb! Welcome aboard the pip ship! A dream that makes you feel like that, must surely make going to sleep ~ a supreme pleasure!  Very well-written! Sweet dreams! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel  |
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Deb123 New Member
since 2009-07-12
Posts 6Hampshire, England |
Thankyou. ive never had anyone read my stuff before so this is a little daunting. lol |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I know what you mean! I felt the same way when I first started, but it gets easier ~ and it surely will for someone who writes as well as you do!  EA |
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