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You Touch Me So...
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You Touch Me So... |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
You touch me so roughly gently, My soul sings coarsely and freely, As my body, it also sings, At the joy that your rough touch brings And again, you touch me sweetly. I reach for you so greedily, You reach for me so hungrily, And we’re whispering sweet nothings, You touch me so… You fill me up so completely, You touch me so indiscreetly, We go from whispered sweet nothings, To raspy, passionate somethings, ‘Till I roll over sleepily, You touch me so… Arana Darkwolf |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rachaelfuchsberger - a fine write of longing... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a sincere and moving poem, talks a lot to heart...Thanks for sharing. yann |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed your exposure here ms |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you all for your compliments...now if only I could get meter into it. Arana Darkwolf |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Arana, You tell that person to always be gentle. Otherwise, Bones and I will have to smack them around a little bit. This poem works good. Love Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is nice, enjoyed your write  ARCTIC WIND |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Dear, sweet Bobby, thank you. Arctic, thank you for your compliment. Arana Darkwolf |
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