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Open Poetry #45
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Johan
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0 posted 2009-07-11 04:54 PM


Haiku

lonely as the sea
deep as all man's memories
an island of dreams.
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-07-11 05:44 PM

A fine haiku!
Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-07-12 06:48 AM

Yes, very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita
2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2009-07-12 10:32 AM

Hello Johan...delectable haiku; impressive and molding imagination, a very enjoyable read. keep on the good work.

yann
Bill Charles
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4 posted 2009-07-12 12:14 PM

Johan - a lot said with this writing. Well done...

BC
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2009-07-12 12:18 PM

Thank goodness for those islands of dreams!

Deep thoughts ~ expressed well ~ and succinctly.


EA
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2009-07-14 07:22 PM

Enjoyed...James
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