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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2009-07-11 08:42 AM





I would like to be your gift
wrapped in silver lining
with a bright red bow
for you to slowly undo
And you say...
I am wrapped
in a day's sunshine
Who wins?
You do...


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2009 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
1 posted 2009-07-11 08:54 AM


Dear Roniece, when you write we all win, a lovely gifting you bring my friend, enjoyed.

Rick

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india
2 posted 2009-07-11 08:56 AM


You are a true gift. Wrapped with a kind heart and wonderful words.

clever talks delay friendship!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2009-07-11 08:58 AM


Rick... your words bring me smiles
Ku..... your words bring me joy

xxRDBxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2009-07-11 10:09 AM


Dear Roniece, this is so very lovely and again ... so generous! You definitely ARE a precious gift and you do bring sunshine always.
Love and joy.
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2009-07-11 10:18 AM


You ARE a gift to anyone who is fortunate enough to have you in their life ~ and to those of us who know you through pip!

Keep on shining on!

Love 'n a smiley face,

Linda

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2009-07-11 10:23 AM


Yo dear RDB,

Yes, that sounds about right.

Nice work Hon.

Love Bobby

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
7 posted 2009-07-11 02:25 PM


so resounding of grace and beauty, a lovely work Roniece...I will see gift with other eyes now...

have  anice day

yann

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
8 posted 2009-07-11 08:49 PM


I like this

Yoin

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
9 posted 2009-07-11 11:23 PM


Roniece Dawson-Bruce - I'm all wrapped in silver lining with a big red bow. Where do I send me too?

BC

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
10 posted 2009-07-11 11:59 PM



Dear Roniece you are a gift to all of us
a special one that we all love. you sent a

wonderful message with so few words,
much enjoyed my dear. love

Roniece can you please send me an email.

Lindsay

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