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Oh brother!
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Oh brother! |
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pastaforia New Member
since 2009-07-10
Posts 2Nevada |
He gets away with everything even from the start caint you see hes evil deep within his heart everything he touches is broken far apart he doesnt even act it but he is really smart he doesnt ues his wits insted he used his fists he is not an angel but still my mom insists hes my little brother and a pain in the butt hes is my family and i love him very much |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
There you go dear Pastaforia, You have the right idea. Love bobby |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
WElcome to Passions! Enjoyed your poem, and smiled, as I too have a little brother. |
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faeriemythc Junior Member
since 2009-06-18
Posts 40KY |
Haha, I like this. I too have a little brother and can relate. Even though he's in his 30's now that still reminds me of him. aka Carmen |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Nice poem. Welcome.  Your 'brother love' will only grow as you get older. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very cute and a situation to which many can relate! Welcome to Pip! Love, Margherita ps There are quite a few typos you surely could have avoided if you spell checked the text. It does not interfere with the message of your poem, but a little more attention does not hurt. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"He gets away with everything" made me smile remembering~~ but funny thing is when you get older each of you will remember your youth differently..as in my family for example each thought dad/mom loved the other one more~~ M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I often felt the same way, my brothers got away with all kinds of naughty antics while us girls were expected to behave! LOL, but I have to admit I had my own naughty spells. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, brother! Can I ever relate! My younger brother was a charmer and could bat his big baby blues and talk himself out of trouble.What a little devil. Lordy, lordy, I used to get blamed for the mischievous things that he did! Now he's the angel and I'm the little devil.   An adorable write! Don't worry. There's still hope! My little brother is now my big 6'5" brother ~ and my protector!  Sending a hug for each of you,  EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks for the delightful smile... and Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
pastaforia - nothing like a little brother to be a pain, but too also love. Mine is now gone, and I miss him... BC |
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