Open Poetry #45 |
She is Sunshine |
Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
She is sunshine of most glorious day Of bright smiles given to warm empty soul And though she does not know she lights my way I am here because of her, now made whole Bright, as a thousand other jealous stars Their hatred eternal, barely restrained So close almost to touch, yet oh so far Still I can feel her heat like licking flames To worship her, my goddess of the sky The only thing that is keeping me here To look at her with unshielded eyes Is the only thing on earth that I fear Her spirit like the sun powerful burns I, bathed in her glow, continue to yearn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Full of grace your spirit dances through this delightful poem. You are beautifully inspired and it is a pleasure to read you while you are in this "yearning phase". Love, Margherita |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Oh yes, I agree with the above post! Tara |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
CG, I had to put my sunglasses on to read this one. I really like it. It's hot and bright and passionate. A |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a warm poem on what is a very warm day... this will melt winter. I only hope that your Sunshine will some day realize all she's wrought...for you to write! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmmm, methinks ye have more than a tad bit o' sunshine radiating from thyself, Sir Poet Knight. EA |
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Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
I agree, a delightful poem. Johan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely sonnet~~ M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Just reading this brightens my sky, bathes the moment in a warm amber glow. |
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