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Open Poetry #45
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Mcmust
Junior Member
since 2009-07-09
Posts 17
TN
0 posted 2009-07-10 12:11 PM

My love
You have made my heart  a carpet
That lying down on the steps of your ego
So your thought could elegantly  step down
Without tainted
And passing  me through
untouched
To the ladder  
at the other end  
Of your words  

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Johan
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since 2009-05-13
Posts 88
Lincolnshire, England U.K.
1 posted 2009-07-10 01:14 PM

Well said in the poetic form.

Johan
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-07-10 04:34 PM

WOW!!!!!!!!

~ARH
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