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Open Poetry #45

She has got attitude

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2009-07-09 08:21 AM

Ten years old world
(To the daughter of Ferosh is O.)
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Infighting between cyborgs
is yet to be appeased,
but with a jerk windows’ panes
flash a secret signal that
convinces her, it’s morning.
She wears her attitude
of which she is quite proud;
it has kept the boys and
her parents too at a bay.
The cereals are dull like
those papers of morning news.
The news have taken a tour
of thousand miles and fathoms
to nestle a dragonfly,
now waiting to be noticed
by a ten years old lady
busy in her chat on cell.
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=© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-07-09 09:17 AM

Excellent, dear Ku! You entered the world of a ten year old with your usual ability to observe, to listen, to record and to share in wonderful poetic form.

Yes, they do have attitude and oh ... those sms that fill their day!

And the dragonfly will have to wait ... her silvery wings will have to flash and reflect upon the cellphone to make her raise her eyes.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2009-07-09 02:04 PM

I can see and hear her - and the dragonfly - in the golden embrace of the early morning light - caught by your poetic camera that has snapped the moment for eternity.

Owl

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-07-09 02:35 PM

Little girls grow up so fast! ~ At least they like to think they're grownups! lol

"a ten years old lady
busy in her chat on cell."

Linda

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2009-07-10 10:36 AM

Ku,

And that attitude is not going to get better for some time. Seriously, I love attitude when it shows spirit and independence.

Thank you for this poem - it made me smile.

Alison

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