Open Poetry #45 |
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Becoming One |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Becoming One I hand crank the music box playing "Fur Elise" and while it plays I think of all the love that lives in me and the woman that I love. Even when she's not there through the music in the air I hear her, I see her, I smell her, I touch her and I kiss her. Its at these times when me and Suzie become one. JamesLee 07July 2009 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful, dear James. "Für Elise" is really so captivating, it does induce feelings of belonging and oneness. Well done! Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello James, all your poem touch me, romance is everywhere. thanks yann |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is lovely! ~ The sound of music **sigh** ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
awe, sweet ![]() ![]() ![]() Lana |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
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