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Intoxicating reality
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Intoxicating reality |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
I’m coiled in doom My heart and I hide in gloom We never want to be found We hid our selves here When your feelings became clear As you stomped my heart on the ground Now I never fell sober Like my life’s almost over And peoples voices are a muffled sound So here I’ll stay But I’ll be back one day Good bye I’ll see you around |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The melancholy is felt, dear Kudanesh, but in the concluding stanza you realize your power to get over it. That's great. Well written piece of lost love. Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very powerful, I've noticed throughout your writes that not only are you growing, but figuring out how to convey messages on these pages of blue... ARCTIC WIND |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
thank you for your kind words |
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