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Temptation (haiku)
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Temptation (haiku) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * * Love words sprout on lips tempting scent of wildflowers make for a spiced kiss * * * |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Very spicy haiku Margherita. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
wouah Margherita , it is so delicate, I read it three times in a row and always marvelled, i like the association of perfumes with sensations of love...Now I am gonna read it again... have a nice day yann |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
hey!  we were on the same wave length! very cool  and loved this, exactly! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - be careful of those tempting scents of wild flowers, for they can be most, well, most tempting... BC |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
Hello again I have not been on for a while but I come back to this lovely little write thanks again for a lovely read your old friend Kudanesh |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This poem Margherita has left a beautiful kiss on these pages of blue for everyone to remember! I really enjoyed this. and for the picture ~ wow  ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...the power of a kiss...James |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
ohh sounds like a stolen kiss out of doors to me...I like it Yoin |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, What lovely lips. It's a good poem too. Temptation is the best thing going since sliced bread. Love Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (07-10-2009 10:47 PM).] |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dearest 'rita...  ...exactlyyou wonderful haiku poet you! such simple grace... like you...  shellie |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
M- I loved the inclusion of this sensual black and white photo... it lets your words provide the delicate colors! Indigo |
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firechild Junior Member
since 2009-05-18
Posts 14 |
absolutely beautifull!!! cheers firechild |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
What a delicious haiku Margherita ! Blowing you a kiss from here ! Katriona |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all from my heart, my dear Poet friends, for stopping by and telling me you enjoyed this, I appreciate you so much. Love, Margherita |
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Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
What a great Haiku, I'm actually a lover of the Haiku verse and this one is perfect. Johan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A spiced kiss such as this would be totally irresistible! ~ and since kissing is my favourite food, I think I'll go pluck some wildflowers and speak some mots of love! ~ and pucker up!  Sending love, smiles, 'n a big hug, Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Johan, for your appreciation! I will watch out for your haiku offerings. Angelo Terrestre Linda, I am so hungry in this moment, do you think a kiss would be nourishment enough? ... it would be enough, I know ... if ...! I read somewhere that kissing is a slimming activity. So ...Thank you beautiful Angel. Love, Margherita  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
exquisite...exceptionally well done... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Hmmmm! Just my kind of kiss. Full of spice! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
*Wink~ Wonderful turns...I think the words smiled Margherita. |
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faeriemythc Junior Member
since 2009-06-18
Posts 40KY |
Love it. I can just smell the flowers and taste the sweet spiciness of that kiss. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
very true spoken words show the limits of poetry |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Margherita, Wow, glad I found this, sweet and exquisite, and the picture fits wonderfully, Bloodline |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Priceless picture and poem, Margherita. You send the senses a'reelin' ! Have a terrific week, Lady! miscellanea |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
A very popular pour, Margh...and I must join in the applause for this one. Jan |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Oh goodness gracious, what a delicious and divine temptation. How on earth could I miss this truly wonderful haiku ? I think my lasik operation must be backfiring on me In any case, I am so impressed with this one, so beautiful I am almost blown away Margherita. So sorry I didn't see it before, not the intention at all dear friend. Love and huggs 2 U Katriona |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
I can not deside which is the most beautiful, the lips, the rose or the words. Love 'un stuff Billie C. |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
I cannot deside which is the most beautiful, the lips, the rose or the words. Love 'un stuff Billie C. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, for your appreciation of this "temptation" Love and joy! Margherita |
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