Open Poetry #45 |
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For I will know.. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia ![]() |
I do not think you see What it is I do I do not think you feel I am important to you But if I were to leave If I were to go away I would want you to know Only good thoughts are left for you And if by chance you miss me Then all is well No need to follow thru For I will know And this will bring a smile Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
seems they never realize, until we do leave... enjoyed this ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'Tis a sad state of affairs, but we often don't fully appreciate something ~ or someone, untily they are gone. May you always have a reason for smiling from the inside out. You are a very special human being, Roneice. ![]() Love, a big hug, and a warm smile, Linda ![]() |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am missing you, RDB. This is sweetly sad. xoxoxo Ali-girl |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice of you to be so nice,,he must have been nice |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
And the knowing is half the battle. And fun. lol I understand this completely. |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
so so so beautiful..and i can't say i haven't said this in my mind a thousand times... :-) loved it! love, Min |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How tenderly generous you are, dear Roniece, but this is the result of emotional growth and wisdom. Beautiful in its melancholy! Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a beautifully tragic & triumphant write...very nicely done |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear RDB, This poem rather begs the question, how will you know? Love Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
So touching, this is real love, thank you Roniece for a moment of happiness. yann |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, when things are going well, people accept the God sent of the good days and so often forget who or what people made the day/days flow so well. The heart is a very sensitive part of us all, the simple word thankyou would suffice or a smile of gratitude; nothing brings the needing to be recognised and appreciated. I am so sure you are loved and appreciated by so many Roniece, life sometimes sucks but then we find a gift so sweet and again everything is ok. I enjoy the fact that you are writing again my friend, thanks for sharing. Rick |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Roniece - such graceful words to someone left behind. Amazing write... BC |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A feeling some are plagued with ~ But this thought leaves a bitter taste with a sweet end. I really enjoyed reading your poem RDB! I always love to read your pennings... I am hoping everything is well! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
Brilliant I really enjoyed this Thank you Kudanesh |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you bless me all with your generous and loving comments.. thank you.. RDB x Ali-girl, I miss you too x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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