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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 He is beautiful…. a wildflower smile that makes you wish he would laugh in deliberate machismo, so you’ll look so he can devastate your heart with a flick of his eyes while exasperatingly unaware you would do anything for … just… one… kiss… ~SEA~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh yeah! This almost makes up for running out of coffee! xoxoxo A |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Just 'one'? That's it SEA? It's gonna take a lot more than that. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Have you ever felt your lips pucker, unconsciously, hoping for the kiss that never comes, I too know this feeling. Emotional depth in this poem. Much enjoyed, Nice to see you writing. I missed your wonderful tallent on these pages, Tracey. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It seems we are both in a kissy mood, dear SEA! Anything for ONE kiss seems a lot, but during the "phase of desire" that's exactly what we think. Words like luring flames ... beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear SEA, Nice Renoir--poem combination. Love Bobby |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea.. you would tempt the demons with your single savoring request.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, and what a kiss that would be! Kissing is my favourite food, and his wildflower smile sounds delectable!  To love 'n kisses! Linda  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
v. well done! much applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - yes, just one kiss at times is all it takes... BC |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 ohhhhhhhh lol you wanted his kiss... you painted this longing and ache well...remembering the days...sigh of that one kiss....  hugsssss~~**~~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A wonderful end to your beautiful poem SEA! This is just amazing. I loved the photo with the poem, just lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
wonderful...James |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Sea - This is one of my favorite Renoir paintings! There is an air of flirtation and relaxation that fills the canvas and makes me yearn for those afternoons of good wine and stolen glances. Enjoyed! Indigo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
When its a great kiss, you want a whole lot more! That is one of my favorite Renoirs, The Luncheon scene. There was so much going on in that one scene! But the woman on The Swing is still my all time favorite Renoir. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~lovely, sea |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much!!  yes, I thought the picture was perfect |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"that makes you wish he would laugh in deliberate machismo" ...wow...and Renoir, too...wow... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
And sometimes, just one kiss is all it takes to steal a heart. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
sooo wonderful SEA.. I love this! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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faeriemythc Junior Member
since 2009-06-18
Posts 40KY |
Mmmm, just that one kiss! Great writing. |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
I LOVE to kiss! It is life and breath to my sappy romantic self lol. And this poem puts that feeling into words so perfectly! You have captured the emotions of wanting and needing that first real kiss so well! Kudos Kudos and more Kudos |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
 bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
The touch of SEA, so much like magic spell words. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sea, this is breath-taking, wetting one's appetite for that long awaited... um... see what you've gone and done? Your thread has everyone's heart a'reelin' for the insatiable feelin' ! misce' |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Caught up in the pout... Lovely. H |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Great poem! Says much in just a few lines and yet goes straight to the heart. Cupid must have been your muse for this one Jan |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh Sea, good to feel the swell of you again. this... quote: love the word "devastate" here. made me want that kiss. good to read you again |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
glad to see this 'write' return near the top of the "P.I.P.-land" by the cyber-sea queue! continuing applause for this 'penning' ! |
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