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She is Poetry
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She is Poetry |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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She speaks in lines of affection Her words written for close inspection Mysteries within the mind they tell Gossamer stories she tells so well The heart pours forth a torrent Of drowning in waves love spent And beneath her sentences, a whispered plea Breathed in my ear, only for me My eyes to trace in slow repeat Her curves and lines in frozen heat To become immortal this way Within moods of swoon and sway If only she could somehow see That she is all I read, she is poetry |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful tribute to the mistress that holds all our hearts. *S* |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you suthern. I was on a personification kick when I wrote this. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautifully painted portrait of Lady Poesy and your favorite 3D reality goddesses.  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
To become immortal this way Within moods of swoon and sway If only she could somehow see That she is all I read, she is poetry wow, guy...every girl wants to be read that way! absolutely beautiful |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
to have someone who can decipher our meaning is all that matters. Indigo |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you midnite...you are my favorite godess, 2D, 3D or otherwise. lol Brneye...you are being read that way, with your talents, I know that you are. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Indigo...if only I knew what I meant sometimes. lol Thanks. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
i liked this so much, i came back to read it again : ) |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Hey, wow....a two-fer. lol And I came to thank you, again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Should I take a goddess bow? LOLYou are way too sweet, Jerry. Actually, I think our lady Serenity already has the Prime Goddess position. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful words, friend. Enjoyed this very much. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you Kaoru. And, Kacy...was there an election to this position or self appointment? |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Love the couplet rhyming scheme in this one ! Poetic words of pure delight. Heart2Heart |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
amazing words, to compliment someone who is a poetic Goddess... ~Loved This Poem...soft and gentle! ~ARH  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I can only imagine this one being read  This write is beautiful and something that every woman would wish for. Being written within the heart of words, would indeed be considered a precios gift to it's recpient I would think. |
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shelerella75 Member
since 2009-01-30
Posts 58 |
Ah, the seductress that woos us all! Lovely write.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It can be interpreted in more than one way, either one holds beauty. Love, Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am thinking this might be my favorite of all the poems that I have read of yours - it is a beautiful piece of writing. Alison |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
Love it! damn... this must be why the men i meet always fall short - their affections are not as beautifully eloquent as this! -cheye |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lovely thoughts, what a beautiful way to be thought of~ Lucky lady, lucky you!!! |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Chalmette Guy - When we honor her, respect her and compliment her, she listens to us. When we kiss her, caress her and stroke her, she holds us. And when we wine her and dine her and tease her, she protects us. That's why we poets go to the ends of the Earth for her. Only the poet can capture her sentiments so well and you did it with impact. Love the craft of your work. Namyh |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We are sure glad you've returned, Poetman... your lines are wonderfully warm! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you tie the first and last lines together so well...expert craftsmanship...beautiful write |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Oh! That all men thought of thier ladies as you do. What a wondeful world. Billie C. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Keep it up and you'll have a global following. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this gives a lady hope...and I smiled all the way through, savoring each and every word... lovely |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Wow...thank you all. I think this is probably the most replies I have ever gotten in all the years. I'm speechless. |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
see? us chicks drink this kind of stuff up!! I would feel very, very, very smug if I were you. |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Wow...this blows me away. I don't know if you're seeing poetry as a woman or the woman as poetry, but this is beautiful. Loved it! Tara |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
That's sorta the point, thank you Tara. |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
And what a wonderful lady she is. Does she have a sister? great write Yoin |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Seriously gorgeous writing here. I keep coming back to this. If you give this poem to a woman, she will be putty in your hands forever. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
how wonderful is this piece of writing! What a gift you have gifted us with.. thank you, a joy to read and savour.. off to my library with this treasure!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you're becoming a quick fav of mine... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Literal or otherwise ~ personification of poetry or not ~ THIS is sheer poety.  Love & Poet Light, Linda |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I'm sure that your lucky lady reads you as poetry, too. Very nice piece. Arana Darkwolf |
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