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Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-07-07 12:33 PM

OldPoet
Member

since 2009-06-30

Posts 112
The Left Coast

1 posted 2009-07-07 12:44 PM

Golden words against a smokey golden sky. Nice!

"Im learning to fly but I aint got wings
Comin down is the hardest thing." - Tom Petty

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-07-07 02:07 AM

Thank you, Poet.

Alison

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2009-07-07 08:01 AM

nothing like a natural stogie to pollute the orange...enjoyed it

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-07-07 08:20 AM

"taunts the sun", I liked this imagery.

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

5 posted 2009-07-07 09:08 AM

Mesmerizing words to enthrall, a beautiful
portrayal.
Heart2Heart

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

6 posted 2009-07-07 09:09 AM

PS: Cute title too :-)
Heart2Heart

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2009-07-07 09:30 AM

bruised sky...that was really good...

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2009-07-07 10:43 AM

Yep, D - inhale, inhale and suck it down.  Just don't release it.

xooxox
A

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Thank you CG.

A

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H2H,

I am glad that you liked poem and title.  Titles are really hard for me - maybe for everyone.

A

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SEA,

Thank you, dahlink!

xooxo
A

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

9 posted 2009-07-07 12:54 PM

Magnificent, Alison - both the poem and the photo! Well, you could blow me over with a feather - you struggle with titles? You certainly have fooled me (and I am sure everyone else) about that for as long as I have read your works of art!

Owl

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2009-07-07 03:22 PM

(smiles) While wildfires are always depressing to hear about and always carry these ominous connotations, something about their colors has always fascinated me as well and can't help but be captivating, and this poem of yours captures their haunting beauty ever so well! (huggies)

Yay, it's great to read your lovely work again! (does happy dance)

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

11 posted 2009-07-07 08:33 PM

~hey, girly...

i love haiku

well done

~shel

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

12 posted 2009-07-07 09:08 PM

Yo dear Alison,

This is an interesting picture and haiku combination.

Love Bobby

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