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tender travel |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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you cannot cruise along my heart paths leaving tire marks and dusty footprints ignoring my no~trespassing signs and breaching banned gates to my mindtime unless, of course, you don’t mind sweeping left remnants of ocean salt and sand from my barefoot morning beach walks all along the shores of your mindcorners it’s only fair… . |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Girl, your poetry is just getting better and better. I gotta say ... I am a fan. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes..this is an interesting line of windows with smile looking back in them..enjoyed it |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
I agree it's only fair. Wow, this one stands out today. Heart2Heart |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
oh shellie! this is brilliant! exactly what i was feeling! love, Min  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is simply amazing, dear Shellie. Your very best ... (of what you have shown us till now). Totally captivating. There is great heart-mind activity! Love, Margherita |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
girl! this is my current fave of yours. Enjoying your talented pen, Heather |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Amazing poetry. Whew. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'll give him a broom! "It's only fair!"  Love the way you write, you Brown-eyed Beauty! Love 'n a hug, SS |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~alison... you mean i have a fan?  i'm really glad it is you...thank you ~shel  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, mr dark... browneyes |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~hey, heart lady... yes, it is only fair i'm glad you liked it ~s |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dearest minoli! so good to see you! i'm glad we had like~minds today : ) love you, shellie |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dearest 'rita... thank you so much! seriously, this came out of me and i wasn't sure how it would go over, so i am thrilled that you all liked it so much! i'm gonna do a happy dance right here on your space...lol  love you,  shellie |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~heathergirl... all of yours are my current favs! you rock love, shel |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks jerry... for that ~whew~ it says alot shellie |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~lovely 'ea' linda... thanks for the broom...he may be able to sweep me out of his mind... but he'll never get my sand out of his heart  love you, ss ~s |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - I do like the way and words of how you wrote this. Just perfect verse, and what you feel... BC |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
hi, bc! been missin' you around here... thank you... |
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