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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Like a frog you leapt into my life Ready to share And let me share Our fair share Of grief and strife Like an Ali cat you slunk into my heart Ready to wish And let me wish What we wish For love to do its part Like a lost puppy I'll follow you to whatever ends Ready to laugh and cry Ready to crash and fly Ready to stand with you or stand by So long as we Continue to be... Best friends Arana Darkwolf |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think this is my favorite poems of your, Rachael. xoxoox Z |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
ummm, one thing .. should it be Alley cat .. or were you just thinking of me. (grins) Ali |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I love you, Z. It actually served a dual purpose, because there's you, and there's my friend here in Las Vegas, Ali, and you're both very important to me. I'm grateful to both of you, and that little misspelling allowed me to include you both in one. xoxoxoxoxoxo Arana Darkwolf |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I must admit...I'm drawn to form in poetry...and this form works for this write...nicely done... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Arana, Friends are always great to have. Love Bobby |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
steavenr, I am not sure if the form I used here is an official type, but I am glad you enjoyed it. Bobby, You couldn't be more right. And I've found that here at PiPtalk, there is no shortage of friends. Arana Darkwolf |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms rachael..your soft and simple pleasure here is lovely...I spent a lot of time in vegas and it is hard to keep this gentle prospective... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed the sincerity of the poem. yann |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Stranger, It IS difficult, but I find that if I don't at least TRY to maintain it, I start to lose my mind. yann, Thank you for your kind words. Arana Darkwolf |
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