Open Poetry #45 |
Sweet Corn |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Linda took the high side on a country horseshoe curve. She always took the high side, even in the straight stretches I remember "Sweet Corn" when she was young and wild and pretty. Young and pretty faded when she was twenty four From twenty four to forty four only the wild was apparent To see the rest, you either had to look deep or be able to remember. I remember "Sweet Corn" before the scars upon her lips. before her teeth were knocked out from running into love before she gave up on love before she started making old men feel young and living off of their Social Security checks. She was nineteen when she sat in the passenger seat of my old ' 63 Galaxie The hot July sun reflected off of her blond hair and blinded me I had to stop We had to go I am still a fool over a peasant blouse It was a different high side on a different back road horseshoe that sent us into the cornfield that night By early morning, the beer and wine were gone. By sun up, the stems were ashes By noon, we had been to the store and back. Come sun up, we walked to the store again and back It took us three days to get out of that corn field. Just a field of feed corn. but I remember "Sweet Corn" when she was young and wild and pretty *** |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
With me? It was daisies. Um, that's right. Meet "crazy daisy". Loved the share. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
"before her teeth were knocked out from running into love" powerful image... "It took us three days to get out of that corn field." i'm glad she got three days of good love...i really, really like this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wonderful, simply wonderful writing. A |
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