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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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day-o dawn, ol red round easterly breast of gypsy harlot sky there at the lips of black beard trees and the ways I know your eucalyptus perfume like the eye burn of your sweaty wet that you wring from my brow when you are just another laughing woman in high hem neon and your noon bootery or that jaunty eve of horizon sighed making the hounds pant to moon til they lather their furlong glisten like the leather man's tattooed eternity day-o evening, ol red round westerly lovely as the lonely bosom of mistress night there with the black beard trees behind to cover your sin usual with their salt speak and you are on the dawn side of a moaning sky _____________ daark (highway series) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-06-2009 10:01 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
way good Mr Daark, way good.. x RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R&B...thanks lady |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You awaken nature to an incredible choral performance! Love, Margherita  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
day-o dawn, what a beautiful way to start my morning. Thank you, D. This is lovely writing. A |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
quote: layers, Dark One....upon layers~ ~twisted fairytales & lovely use of language~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"there at the lips of black beard trees and the ways I know your eucalyptus perfume" diggin it mister |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks so much special lady ______________ ms ali-san, thanks little one. __________________ bel1e, thank you pretty pantha..you smile me daughter! _________________ suesea, thanks babe, you don't have to call me mister..just call me often. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~i think i understand what you are saying...more importantly, i can feel it... : ) ~browneyes [This message has been edited by brneyedgrly (07-06-2009 07:42 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes...thanks for the eyes here |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Gods lovin' you on the road Big D. I almost feel like a jealous lover! H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP..there is always room for someone unbound behind me..thanx babe |
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